Aren't The Pools Amazing?

                      Swimming in the Pool
It was 9am on Sunday morning when we prepared our swimming gear. My family, cousin, and I went to Lagoon Pool & Leisure Centre because it was a very hot outside.

When we arrived, my mum only paid for three dollar because children are free of charge. My brother and cousin had a bracelet which meant that they didn't need anyone to look after them. We took our goggles and then we were off. 

First we went swimming in the children's pool but we were for a little while. Then we went to the out door splash pad. I only stayed there for 10 minutes because for me the water was splashing shapely and and kind of hurting my skin. We went back  to the children's pool again and we tried to help or sister to swim but she was always that scared she might drown.

When my sister went to the in door pool we played our own game.I called it pool race. When we got to the end of the pool we needed to go back to the starting line then we go under and over the ropes in the pool. I always came last because I was just  starting to learn swimming, then is was time to go home. We got changed in the bath room just in time for my dad to pick us up. My mum had to walk home because we didn't a have space for her.

I like the splash pad the most because we had so much fun there. I hope that we could go back there again soon.

learning Intention: I am learning to write clear sentences.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I make sure that the subjects and the verbs agree with each other.