It was Friday the 10th of March, when the end of the school bell rang, I grabbed my bag and went quickly outside. Soon I saw my dad and ran towards him. Normally my mum is the one that picks us up but today was her first day of work .
First we dropped my cousin off. Then we had to wait for my brother to finish school in Glenn Innes. While we were waiting for my brother, we brought, we brought some chicken from KFC for dinner. Once my brother had met up with us, we went to Burger King.
When we arrived, we all ordered the Bomb because it’s made out of bacon, hamburger with lots of meat in it. We also bought ice cream sundaes. I had a strawberry flavoured sundae, but I didn’t finish mine because my tummy was so full from the Bomb burger, so I took my sundae home to eat.
After we arrived home, I got changed into my casual wear and took my sundae with me to go and watch a movie. It was a movie called Planes. It was about a plane who dreamed of becoming a racer in the sky. However he was scared of heights. After the movie my dad told us to brush our teeth and go to bed.
learning Intention: We are learning to follow the structure of a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write an introduction, the events, and a conclusion about going to the pools.
Hi Alizzandro
ReplyDeleteYou must really miss your mom. I get that feelings sometimes every time my mum is at work. Anyways this was a great story. Hopefully you could do more like these. Well done
Thank you Tuakana and I hope you have a great term break!
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